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December 2010, a lonely kid named Andrew, and 59 other kids are going up to a snowhill in some woods from an orphanage where they live one afternoon. You see, the main character is Andrew, a kid who had problems of paranoia when he was 8, and some murderer broke into his house, and killed his family, although you never see how that happened, you can feel the torture he feels sometimes because he hides his feelings by blank expressions and almost never talks.

With a side effect that serious, you'd think he had no friends at all, but some kids actually find Andrews' blank personality and rare use of his voice, pretty interesting, as he has at least 5 of them. So, anyway, while everyone is having a snowball fight, Andrew, is just sitting by a tree, reading a book, and looking up at the sky. But then, his friends come and try to comfort him. Though, that only works a bit as Andrew's still depressed, and still doesn't speak.

So, the fun, and snowball fight goes on for about a few hours, as it's now 7:00 PM aprox. and the group decides to head back to the orpahnage, but then, one of the kids gets a little eager to check out, whats in that big woods over there, becasue legend has it, a big creature probably a mutated rat lived in the woods along time ago, because the orphanage used to be a lab, where experiement on animals and such, so one of the kids goes in, and the camera is now focused on the kid, who eventually finds a dead end, with a river that has no bridge, so the kid decides to go back but when he turns around, he slips on something and falls back, hitting the ground.

Now the camera's back on Andrew, as he waits patiently for the kid to come back, though inside, he really wants to leave, and go back to his warm cozy bed. But then, 5 minutes later and the kid's not back, an older kid decides to go looking for the kid, everyone except, Andrew and some of friends, agree, but Andrew doesn't seem to have a choice nor does his friends so he agrees. So, the search is on and when they get into the center of the woods, the older kid, splits the group in to 2's. And luckily, Andrew is with all his friends, so that at least, makes him a little comfortable. And then for 2 hours, the group with andrew, finally stops and camps out. So, Andrew gets out his book, and reads while his friends chat with him, though they don't get a response out of him, so they decide not to bother with him if he doesn't want to talk.

Now, morning is awakening, and the group awakens, with the leader saying they must continue looking for the kid that got lost, so Andrew puts away his book, and continues to journey with the others. So, the journey is still on, until they hear rumbling in the trees, and noises start to be heard. The group then circles each other, the people come out, revealing to be 8 kids from the other group, and they look pretty screwed up, some with snow on them. They explain, that the group was going down a road and then a giant avalanche of snow had come down the same road, and the group leader wasn't even looking, but before the group, or the leader realized it was too late, the snow had covered them all, except the 8 that stayed back.

The group leader, shocked at this, decides they'd better go back, before anything else happens. So, Andrew, really excited about this, quickly heads the other way, until he comes to a suddenly built bolder that is blocking the the way out, as the other group realizes, one of exclaims that is was a result of the alvalanche, but some have their doubts.

More coming soon.

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Ok. I'll never do it again. Sorry for that post being annoying .