Webcomic - THE MARIO WORLD (sequel)

[Redstar]

I have to say that I am intrigued. My interest has indeed been tuned.

[1upmushroom]

The first three pages are up.

http://thesupermarioworld.tumblr.com/po ... first-page

http://thesupermarioworld.tumblr.com/post/61273180328

http://thesupermarioworld.tumblr.com/post/61273235062

[Francisco_k]

HELLO GUYS!

I edited the first entry. So you know the project re-started and this time with a lot of new ideas!

Please tell us what you think of it and what you wanna see next!

[Redstar]

I'm very happy to see you guys continue this project. Hopefully having the two of you working together will result in an even better story than before.

[Amethyst Dreams]

So far it looks sad. I hope it doesn't get too dark!

[Peculiar]

The paneling is interesting. Rather than the story being read downward it seems to continually move right.

While that in itself isn't bad, the fact that there are so many panels makes the pages kind of busy. Most comics limit the panel count to 4 or 5 per page. Sometimes you'll see 6 or 7, but only by competent artists.

[Marla]

The paneling is interesting. Rather than the story being read downward it seems to continually move right.

It may not work, but I do like it. I think some great visuals can be done this way.