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Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! (COMPLETED)

Postby Serum » Sun Jan 25, 2009 1:05 am

Hey everybody,

I'm currently reworking a fan-screenplay I've been writing based
on Super Mario Bros., it incorporates the science-fiction elements
seen in the movie that got made, along with some fantasy-based
elements, as seen in the 91' draft of the screenplay. However my
version of the script is much more mature and dark in tone it's
definitely a "PG-13," but it stays true to the sense of adventure in
the games and the movie. As soon as I finish writing it, I'll post it
here for all the world to read! So stay tuned for updates and stuff. :mrgreen:

~ C.

Update: I've begun work on writing the outlines and treatment for my version of the script, my introduction is in the new posts.
Update: I'm posting the character profiles I'm writing in the treatment/outlines for the script, you can read them below.
Update: The four main characters of the movie now have their profiles up, check them out below. Mario, Luigi, Daisy and Koopa.
Update: The Scapelli Siblings' (Pauline and Anthony Scapelli) are now up for your reading enjoyment. Now it's on to the Koopa Cousins.
Update: I'm still working on stuff, trust me, it's hard to remain concentrated with Musikfest outside my house...but there's more to come.
Update: Musikfest is almost over, I'll be going back to college soon and am hoping to get as much done as I can...stay tuned.
Update: The character profile for Toad is now up. I'm going to work on the remaining characters, Iggy and Spike, ASAP.
Update: Iggy's profile is now up for reading, onto Spike's, then I'm done with the major characters...
Update: Spike's profile is now completed, and so are the main characters' profiles. I have much more outlining to write, though.
Update: A little taste of the written outline for the opening scene is now up for everyone to read!
Update: Some more of the written outline is now up as a continuing teaser for everybody to read!
Update: Some more of the written outline is up, the story continues onward, enjoy!
Update: Interesting update, it can be read on the next page...
Update: I'm continuing to write more and more of the outline, I'll keep you posted.

Character Profiles

Mario Mario
Luigi Mario
Daisy Toadstool
"King" Koopa
Anthony Scapelli
Pauline Scapelli
"Prime Minister" Toad
Iggy Koopa
Spike Koopa

UPDATES: 7/17/2011

As you can see I've written about 25,000 words worth of this in-depth "fan-fiction," and it's continuing to grow. Right now things are tight as I'm currently working on another independent project for a small press. However I will keep updating as often as I get a chance to write more of this story. Now's as good a time as any to reveal my bigger plan in all of this: In the near future I will be working on a science fiction novel based on the three "Sci-Fi" drafts of the movie, however, it removes all mention of any Mario character or Mario-related reference, as I've always been told by haters of the film that it would be a good movie if it didn't use the Mario characters, so that's exactly what I'm doing. My story, still untitled, is a two-part hard-SF novel along the lines of "The Stand," and "Neuromancer." It's currently only in the notes phase, as I'm working on something else at the moment. If anyone has any suggestions or knows anyone who works in publishing, drop me a message, as right now I write for a very small, independent press. My goal word-count is something along the lines of 250,000 words, which is about the length of "The Stand," I think. Anyway, I'll reveal more later and make an official thread on the subject soon, but for now, keep your eyes peeled for more of this "fan-fiction" treatment and eventually the screenplay.

UPDATE: 7/20/2011

I've finished the detailed outline! Now all that's left to do is revise it and put it into screenplay format!

~C

UPDATE: 7/28/2011

I'm currently transferring the revised notes and outline into a polished screenplay format-- I'm thirty-two pages in, and they're not even out of Brooklyn, yet! If this were a movie, it would be four hours long and have a 60s-style intermission halfway through it. It's looking pretty amazing, though, I must say.

~ C

UPDATE: 8/18/2011

It is finished and should appear on the site very soon!
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Re: Official 2/17/09 FAN-SCREENPLAY thread!

Postby Serum » Mon Mar 09, 2009 8:42 pm

Okay, here's my rough outline of the script!
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"Super Mario Bros."

At the beginning of time, the universe split into two seperate realities from a second, 'Smaller Big Bang.' Both universes are strikingly similar, the same planets and stars in the same places. However, in one universe, on planet Earth, humanity evolved from mammals and simians. In the other universe, humanity evolved from reptiles and fungus. The two realities are seperate, yet joined by a unique force known as the 'Power Stars.' There are seven of them, three in the mammal's reality, three in the reptilian reality and one in an interdimensional gateway located between realities. King Koopa, the vicious ruler of a once peaceful city known as the 'Mushroom Kingdom,' a mirror of our own Manhattan, wants to collect the seven Power Stars to unite the two realities into one, as his reality is riddled with pollution and is slowly becoming uninhabitable. However, the only way for him to do this, is to find the heir to the former ruler of the Mushroom Kingdom's throne, a young woman known as Princess Daisy. Princess Daisy comes from a bloodline of people who didn't evolve either from mammals or fungus or reptiles-- her whole family comes from a mysterious race of overlords who once lived inside the stars themselves. Koopa, being human, cannot join the two realities, only someone of the bloodline can do that. Koopa would have used the King, had he not made him his first victim of a horrifying new technology known as 'de-evolution.' Unfortunately for Koopa, the Princess does not live on the same plain as he does, she is located somewhere on the mammals' side. However, also unfortunately for Koopa, the entrance the other side was sealed many years ago by some sort of explosion, one of which the events surrounding remain unknown even to Koopa at this time. But one day, the seal is broken by another explosion, upon finding this out, King Koopa orders his team of seven specially trained ops to the other side to find the Princess. The Kooplings, as they are known, consist of: Ludwig-Von, Roy, Iggy, Spike, Wendy-O, Morton, and Larry. Together they sweep the city, looking for girls who might be of the bloodline. After nine failures, they find her, working on an archeology dig as a college student. Before this, however, Daisy's boyfriend, Luigi Mario, a young apprentice plumber and his brother, Mario Mario are working on fixing the basement plumbing of a huge apartment complex building in their hometown of Brooklyn. On the night that Daisy is kidnapped by the Kooplings, before the fact occurs, Mario, Luigi, Mario's girlfriend Pauline and Daisy herself go out to eat at a small Italian restaurant. After the dinner is over, Daisy invites Luigi to the archeological dig to see the dinosaur bones they've found. When they get there the site is being flooded by the Marios' rivals, the Scapelli Corporation-- a mob-based utility service. Luigi and Daisy rush back to Mario, who is on his way back from Pauline's house after dropping her off at home. They find him, quickly change into their plumbing overalls and gear and then rush back to the now, half-flooded dig. But when they get there, Scapelli and his men are waiting for the Brothers, with loaded guns, ready to kill. The Kooplings, on their way back from Pauline's, see Daisy, find her as a direct match with a small 'scouter' like device and quickly take care of Scapelli and his men in a big fight where the Marios fight with the Kooplings to take out the Scapelli Corp. When the fight is over, the Kooplings kidnap Daisy and the Marios follow them down a long tunnel-like pipe, which apparently leads to a dead end of a wall of stone. Luigi touches it, it has the consistency of still water. Daisy reaches out of it, her necklace dangling, on the end is a small pendant, the final Power Star! He tries to pull Daisy back, but can only grab her necklace and it gets yanked from her neck as she is sucked in. He is holding the final Power Start now, then he walks through, Mario follows, reluctantly, where he finds himself in the "Star Chamber," where five of the seven Power Stars circle the big Star-- they're beautiful orbs of light, he steps through another gate and it leads out into another pipe tunnel, nearly identical to the other one, only riddled in graffiti and lit with caged floodlights. Luigi is chasing the Kooplings, Mario quickly catches up and follows. They then find themselves in a cyberpunk vision of Manhattan-- the Mushroom Kingdom. Upon the Kooplings arrival at Koopa's Castle, a surreal and darkened version of the former World Trade Center, they present Koopa with the confirmed Princess, who has just gone through testing to see if she is of the bloodline-- it is confirmed, one hundred percent. Koopa is pleased, then he asks for the final Power Star. They all begin blathering, when they realize that Luigi has it. Koopa puts out an alert, with a fifty-thousand 'blue coin' reward for the Plumbers and the star. Meanwhile, Mario and Luigi are exploring this nightmarish Manhattan, when a street samurai robs them of their money, which he finds to be foreign, as well as the Power Star, which he doesn't know what it is...that's when a woman, Birdo, beats the holy hell out of the street samurai and takes the Power Star... soon after that they meet up with Toad, a friendly punk who used to be a servant of the King. He explains to the brothers the situation, soon afterwhich they are arrested by a nearby cop who notices Mario and Luigi's toolbelts, Toad is arrested for treason and they are shipped to the local county jail, where Koopa interviews the two, pretending to be a lawyer, calling himself "Jack Thompson, Attourney at Law." However, it is quickly revealed to them who "Jack Thompson" really is. He's King Koopa, and he sees that the Star is not on the Brothers, so, convinced he knows they know where it is, he shows them the horrors of a technique he invented called 'de-evolution.' He demonstrates this on a prisoner named "Wart," who is Koopa's own brother, but was arrested after going on a killing spree and charged with conspiracy and treason. Wart is strapped into the machine, which sends him flying back into a chamber, turning him into a Goomba-- an eight foot creature of enormous strength, but with limited intelligence and low speeed, Koopa gives 'Wart' an order to kill Simon, the operator of the machine, Wart does so, by picking Simon up by the arm and tossing him into a vat of slime. The Marios', now faced only by Koopa, who, foolishly has forgotten to arm himself, push him into the chair, lock him in, and set the machine for 'Jurassic' settings. Luigi turns the knob up all the way to '10,000' terawats and runs. They escape the room, Koopa comes out unharmed, but mutated slightly, his skin now scaly and his hair has fallen off. Gaurds rush in the room to help him, he orders them after the brothers. Mario and Luigi are now in the garage of the Police Station, where they carjack a cruiser and drive out into the city, followed by Koopa's monster-truck limosuine and four more cruisers. They have a big chase-scene, which leads out into the Koopahari Desert, a wasteland surrounding the Mushroom Kingdom for untold miles. Koopa stops the chase at this, and orders the Hammer Bros to go out and find the Mario Bros. By morning, Mario and Luigi are drifting through the desert outside the city, when they come across a camp of friendly Toadstoolians. The leader, Bloke, asks the Marios what's going on, they explain the whole thing with the Power Stars and the Princess and Bloke begins to speak of the prophecy. Mario thinks it's bullshit, but Luigi listens. Mario wanders back into town on his own after a fight with Luigi, where he finds Birdo, he chases her in an attempt to get the Star back, but finds himself in a chamber called "Ghost House," where strange holograms, called "Boos," attack him when he's not looking. He figures out that if you're looking at them, they can't hurt you, but if you turn away from their sight, they'll attack. He makes his way through the Ghost House and then hits a switch that over-rides something in the building's walls, exploding the roof, letting sunshine in, killing the holograms. Meanwhile, Luigi is making his way back into the city with Bloke and the other three Toadstoolians, by now, Birdo has gotten away and there is a city-wide search and destroy mission for the person who holds the final Star. Luigi meets up with Mario who is fighting off a street gang called the "Troopas." When they meet up, a much more powerful enemy kills the last of the Troopas and then set their sights on the Marios. The Hammer Bros attack by throwing a seemingly endless supply of shrapnel at the Marios, but just the Marios are cornered by the Hammer Bros, the one Hammer Brother is pulled away by something slimy, the other Brother swings around to see what it is: It's Toad! And the slimy thing is the tongue of a big creature he's riding, called "Yoshi." Yoshi devours the Hammer Brother, then sets his eyes on the other brother. The remaining Hammer Brother runs off like a little girl. Mario, Luigi, Toad and the Toadstoolians make their way through the city, all the way to Koopa's tower-- but Koopa is watching them on his telescreens, he sees them coming. Everything is going according to plan. As they come to loading bay at the base of the Koopa Trade Center, King Koopa himself walks out of a garage bay door and greets the small army. He then uses a device that morphs him into a horrific, dinosaur like creature. He stands up, literally breathing fire and attacking the brothers. Mario sees spikes lining the perimiter of the place, lined on the fences. He runs around Koopa, grabs him by his tail, and swings him around, then tosses him into a spiked ball in the corner of the fence! Koopa yelps in pain as the spiked ball explodes when he hits it, then roars, takes a huge breath and exhales fire, setting the garage bay on fire! He runs off into the city. The small army storms the castle, where they make their way to the observatory, where they find the missing Brooklyn Girls and the Princess. Now, they're all happy, reunited and Daisy explains the whole thing. But Koopa, still in dinosaur form, is climbing the tower, he comes to the top, breathing fire, setting the guardrails on fire. Then he runs for Mario, but Luigi pushes Mario out of harms way and then throws his hand out, palm-open, revealing a small, Mushroom-Shaped device that spits fire straight into King Koopa's face! Bowser recedes in agony, Luigi gives the signal to Mario, the Toadstoolians take aim with their Devo-Guns and flame-throwers, de-evolving Koopa into slime, then setting the slime on fire, it explodes in a fiery ball of light, then falls to the ground like a gentle rain. The Marios and Daisy go home after Daisy appoints Toad as the Prime Minister of the Mushroom Kingdom so he can look after it when she's not there. The Marios, Daisy and Pauline go home. Three weeks later, they're having dinner in the same diner they had dinner in at the beginning, where Daisy is explaining all the things she learned about the two realities, she explains that for every person in this world, there exists a person in the other reality, only a mirror image of the person, morphed by their surroundings. The last thing we see is the puddle of goo where Koopa's charred and icky remains are on the ground. But suddenly, a pair of legs walk on screen, they're dressed in purple-coveralls, the camera pans up to reveal a very obese, but muscular man, who looks a lot like Mario, only dressed in gold and purple. He kneels down, touches the slime with his finger, stands up, tastes the slime and looks around him. This is Wario. He smiles evilly...the screen goes black...roll end credits.
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Re: Official 2/17/09 FAN-SCREENPLAY thread!

Postby Phlibbit » Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:43 pm

Very, very interesting retelling of the story. I really enjoyed it. The parts I really enjoyed were having Toad be a mushroom retainer that has been kicked out of the kingdom, and the "Ghost House" idea...really solid. Liked the Jack Thompson reference. Here's some things I want to note/postulate upon, though:

Why does Koopa need a device that changes him into a monster? He had already half-de-evolved anyways; I always thought it would have been cooler in the original movie if Koopa would have progressively de-evolved throughout the whole movie.

Where are the Thwomp Stompers? Miss those.

And finally, as cool as having Wario at the end like that was...all I could think of was Koopa. Where's HIS counterpart, hmm? That would be pretty interesting.

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Re: Official 2/17/09 FAN-SCREENPLAY thread!

Postby Serum » Tue Mar 10, 2009 2:49 pm

Koopa's 'real-life' counterpart is Scapelli.
Remember, it's just a rough draft, so I will incorporate the Thwomp Stompers, and other things.
Koopa is slowly de-evolving, but he decides to give himself a 'powerup' by downgrading to a much more aggressive form in order to take care of things himself.
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Re: Official 2/17/09 FAN-SCREENPLAY thread!

Postby Carl » Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:19 am

I love the bit of Koopa devolving and mutating himself into Bowser.
Also, adding Wario was a cool cliffhanger at the end. Just a minor thing. I don't think he should already have his purple and gold costume. I mean, Mario only picked his up later in the story. Maybe for the beginning, Wario has a rendition of his biker outfit from the Warioware series (a bit less flamboyant probably though), and then later shows up wearing his signature "anti-Mario" suit.

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Postby Serum » Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:40 pm

Alright, something of an update with my little fan-script.

Lately, I've not gotten much writing done on this thing, due to being hired by Staples (The Office Supplies Superstore) in late March and being fired two weeks ago, due to matters of 'seniority' and 'economic-downsizing,' (thanks, Staples!) but now, I've got a lot of time on my hands, so I'm going to try and develop this into something of a screenplay as much as I can, I have a few other things going on as well, including a working rough outline for a story written in 'bizzaro-fiction' style with elements of 'gonzo-journalism' about the making of the movie itself that I can hopefully get published as a novella by Eraserhead Press.

If anyone has any creative input, be sure to tell me!
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Re: Official 2/17/09 FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! (UPDATE! 7/22/09)

Postby Serum » Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:26 am

Authors' note...

Whereas seven, count them, seven writers have 'failed' to write a screenplay based on Nintendo's Super Mario Bros, three of them credited in the final product that was released in 1993, four of them uncredited for (at least) two earlier drafts, I believe that my brother and I have finally come up with a way to please everyone's tastes when it comes to making a movie based on previously deemed 'unfilmable' material. In the following outline/treatment, you will find the basis of a script that might actually be filmable without the threat of being ruined by questionable directors. It combines the 'fantasy' elements of the '91 draft by Tom S. Parker and Jim Jennewein, the hardcore 'sci-fi' elements of the '92 draft by Dick Clement and Ian La Frenais, as well as several ideas seen of the '93 draft by Parker Bennett, Terry Runte and Ed Solomon. And while this version of what seems to be an 'evolving' story, so to speak, focuses more on the dark, gritty sci-fi Blade Runner styling of the Super Mario universe, I think it will retain, at heart, the feeling we all got when we first picked up a Nintendo controller. Many people I've talked to about the 1993 film have said 'it's too dark,' or 'it's too mature,' but I have to say, most of us who've been playing Mario's games for the better part of a decade and a half now have grown up, so, you've grown up, shouldn't your movies do the same? With that, I present the following character profiles, story-outlines and several notes of what I hope will become a good screenplay, and who knows, maybe someday, a movie. Until then, just remember, anything's possible...
...you just gotta believe.

~ C. Robert Merritt, July 22, 2009.
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Postby Phlibbit » Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:23 am

That really makes me wanna read what you've got, when it's finished. Sounds like it should be an interesting mix of old and new...

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Profile: Mario

Postby Serum » Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:25 am

Check it out, I got a character profile written...

MARIO

NAME: Mario Mario
AGE: 35
SEX: Male
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HEIGHT: 5'1
WEIGHT: 200lbs
HAIR: Brown
EYES: Blue
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BIO:

Mario Mario was born March 23, 1958 in Brooklyn, New York, to parents Vito Mario and Maria Mario. He is the older of their two children. Mario grew up learning the trade of plumbing from his father. In 1977 he briefly served in the United States Navy, but was discharged after accidentally sinking a Carnival Cruise Ship with a torpedo from the submarine he was stationed on. Due to a series of unfortunate events in 1980, Mario lost both his parents when they were killed in a train-crash. He inherited his parents money, which was little, as well as his father's plumbing company. He was also left to raise his then-seven year-old brother Luigi. In 1985, Mario became involved with a friendly string of the local mafia run by Anthony Scapelli, he fell in love with Anthony's sister, Pauline and they've been dating ever since. For thirteen years he's been a father, a brother and a master-plumber. Mario lives in a small apartment with his brother Luigi in Brooklyn.

DESCRIPTION:

Short, heavy-set, has a thick mustache under his nose, thick sideburns and a thick five-o'clock shadow on the rest of his face. Heavily tattooed forearms and biceps from his stints in the Navy and the Mafia. Wears old, faded denim overalls and a loose, faded red t-shirt under them and wears a backwards, faded red baseball cap on his head and brown, steel-toed boots on his feet. His hair is medium-long in length and usually hidden underneath his cap. When on duty, he is always seen with his tool-belt, of which he is very protective. His attitude is generally rude, but he means well. Has sort of a moral-handicap when it comes to talking with upper-class professionals and customers, but he usually gets his point across well. Has a short-fused temper, highly skeptical of anything out of the ordinary. He's Catholic but has not gone to mass since his parents' death in '80. He has a few close friends, including his brother, Luigi, his girlfriend, Pauline and his former Don, Scapelli. Mario abides by the 'Godfather' philosophy of 'keeping your friends close and your enemies even closer,' which comes in to play when he meets Koopa, a tyrant dictator of the parallel Manhattan known as the 'Mushroom Kingdom.' He's also brave and very little can frighten him, his deepest fear is being left alone by Luigi and all those near to him. Other than that, he is fearless. Mario is trained in street-fighting, which he learned from his cousin, Stanley, who served eight years in Attica Prison for involuntary manslaughter. Mario may be short and stout, but his bite is a lot worse than his bark, but he only bites when provoked to the point of necessary self-defense. Mario may be a grumpy, ill-mannered fellow from Brooklyn, but his heart is much bigger than his bad-attitude and he's a hero to his brother.

NOTES:

The ideal actor to portray this incarnation of Mario, for me, would be Kevin James. The guy from that Mall Cop movie. He's taller than the described, but that can be overlooked as he really looks the part (height aside) and I believe he could pull off the role with the right direction, as Danny De Vito's far too old to play him these days, given that De Vito was the originally cast Mario back in '91 and '92...
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Profile: Luigi

Postby Serum » Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:01 am

Another character profile...also I want to remind everyone that the reason they're birthdays are so long ago is because the movie takes place in an alternate history, in 1993.

LUIGI

NAME: Luigi Mario
AGE: 20
SEX: Male

HEIGHT: 5'10
WEIGHT: 135lbs
HAIR: Black
EYES: Blue

BIO:

Luigi Mario was born April 15, 1973, in Brooklyn, New York to parents Vito Mario and Maria Mario. Luigi was too young to learn anything about plumbing when his older brother, Mario was an apprentice, and he was also too young to vividly remember the tragic death of his parents, leaving Mario to raise him as both a son and a brother. Luigi is currently a plumber's apprentice to Mario, who runs the formerly titled 'Mario & Sons,' now called 'Mario Bros,' home plumbing company. He can often be found hanging around the local Flower-Shop, where his girlfriend, Daisy works. He's been dating Daisy for over three years, since 11th grade of the High School they attended and graduated from together. Luigi's a quick leaner and is quickly becoming a great plumber, under the wing of his hero and big brother.

DESCRIPTION:

Tall, skinny, doesn't have a mustache, but rather a thick chin-tuft/soul-patch thing going on. He has a tattoo of a daisy on his left shoulder, signifying his love for Daisy. Wears old, faded denim overalls, with a baggy, green shirt underneath them and a backwards green baseball cap on his head, as well as brown, steel-toed boots on his feet. When on duty, he wears a tool-belt, not the standard-issue brown-leather like Mario's, but rather a fabric woven with the colors of the Italian flag. Short, shaggy black hair, usually covered by his cap. Luigi's attitude is almost polar-opposite that of Mario's. Luigi is sort of awkward, shy, but when he says something, it's always useful and informative. He's a believer in all things supernatural and science-fiction related, that is to say, God, aliens and alternate realities. His motto is 'anything's possible.' He looks up to Mario and respects him like a father and loves him like a brother. Whereas Mario is brave, Luigi is a coward. He's afraid of every little bump in the night and usually is on the overly-cautious side of the spectrum. He's always friendly and usually in a good mood despite this, and he's great at making a good first impression on people. Luigi's the Ying to Mario's Yang. Luigi has to put his cowardice aside when Daisy is kidnapped and he must venture into an alternate reality in order to save her. His favorite show is 'The Miraculous World,' hosted by Peter Graves. Luigi is skilled in some Martial-Arts, but doesn't know many techniques, but enough to keep him from being mugged. All in all, he's his brother's brother, and Daisy's hero.

NOTES:

As much as I hate to say it, I think the best actor to portray this incarnation of Luigi is Shia LaBeouf, the kid from Transformers. Only because he represents what the original movie tried to portray Luigi as, which is, a young guy from Brooklyn who has to become a hero. LaBeouf is good at this kind of role, and he looks like the Luigi I have in my head when I write this. Also, the age-gap between him and Kevin James is almost perfect for this theoretical film, making all the pieces fall together quite nicely. I think with the right direction and motivation, Shia could totally be the Luigi for a whole new generation of Mario fans. I didn't like Transformers, but I did like Holes. Also, Shia always attracts audiences.
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Profile: Daisy

Postby Serum » Wed Jul 22, 2009 11:48 am

Here's Daisy's profile, hope you like it...

DAISY

NAME: Daisy Toadstool
AGE: 19
SEX: Female

HEIGHT: 5'5
WEIGHT: 125lbs
HAIR: Red
EYES: Green

BIO:

Princess Daisy Toadstool, was born sometime in 1974, in the Mushroom Kingdom to parents King Bowser Toadstool and Queen Peach Toadstool. It was around that time that Koopa took over and The Queen smuggled baby Daisy to our dimension, leaving her safely at a nunnery. The Queen then returned to her dimension, sacrificing herself in order to seal off the gateway between worlds, so Koopa would be unable to reach her. Daisy is the last known 'living' member of an ancient race known as 'The Stars,' who, for generations, watched over the quiet and peaceful alternate reality parallel our own, inhabited by two other races of people, the Toadstools and the Koopas, who in this reality evolved from Fungus and Reptiles, respectively. She lives with her 'Aunt,' in Brooklyn and works at the local Flower-Shop. She is the only known person left that can merge the two realities, but she doesn't know any of this, until one fateful day when she's leading an archaeological dig in the basement of the Twin Towers for a college class, when her destiny is revealed.

DESCRIPTION:

Short, fit, medium-length fiery-red hair and piercing-green eyes. Usually dresses in jeans and vests, rather than 'girly' clothes, due to her Aunt's opposition to 'slutty outfits.' She is very polite, often times quiet and laid back. She loves flowers and dinosaurs. However, she does not know the first thing about self-defense which leads her into the whole Mushroom Kingdom conflict. Over the course of the conflict, she slowly becomes more and more independent, fighting back at Koopa and his minions, snapping insults at the guards who keep her locked in a cell etcetera, etcetera. She also slowly becomes aware of a supernatural power she possesses in the Mushroom Kingdom, the ability to send help to people who may need it if they're righteous in heart. The 'help' she sends comes in many forms, it might be the healing of a wound, or the finding of a useful Bob-Omb when Mario and Luigi need to blow something up. She is also telepathically connected with a man named Toad, who is a former Knight of her father's now defunct army, now a drifter in the desert surrounding the city. Koopa wants her to merge the realities in an attempt to breath life back into the dying planet that the Mushroom Kingdom is on, followed by the genocide of all creatures from the human reality, namely, mammals. But unknown to Koopa, there are other ways, and his selfishness leads to his downfall and the resurrection of King Bowser and the restoration of life to Sarasaland, the planet that the Mushroom Kingdom and all of its neighbors live on. Daisy is the central character of Super Mario Bros. She may not be the main character, but she is definitely the most important and Luigi's love interest.

NOTES:

Again, as much as I hate to say it, I think the best actress for this incarnation of Daisy would be Miley Cyrus. She fits the bill, both in age and description, and she's very popular in addition to sort of resembling Samantha Mathis, the original Daisy from the 1993 movie. With precise direction and motivation, I believe Miley Cyrus is the right choice for the role of a Princess in need of saving.
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Koopa's profile...

KOOPA

NAME: “King” Koopa
AGE: 55
SEX: Male

HEIGHT: 6'1
WEIGHT: 160lbs
HAIR: Blond
EYES: Gray

BIO:

“King” Koopa was born sometime in 1938 or 1939, though the exact details of his birth are shrouded in mystery. Little is known of his parents, other than that they lived in the 'Dark World,' north of the Mushroom Kingdom, and that they had another son, Wart, who was Koopa's older brother. In his youth, he was a schoolyard bully and when he reached his mid-twenties he became a member of the then Toadstool-ruled Mushroom Kingdom's Congress after graduating law-school and having a brief stint as an ill-fated lawyer. It was during the early 1970s that Sarasaland began having an ecological crisis, forcing the planet to a slow-dying state of waste and anarchy. As a member of the Congress, Koopa suggested that the dimensions be merged, as they were separated by unknown forces eons ago. King Bowser Toadstool rejected this plan saying that it would upset the very balance of reality and possibly destroy the fabric of space and time. Koopa kept pushing the idea until King Toadstool grew angry with him and had him thrown off his seat in Congress. It was with this that Koopa snapped and formed a militia and overthrew the Toadstool rule, de-evolving King Bowser out of spite, followed by his ill-fated attempt to get Queen Peach to merge the dimensions, which resulted in the destruction of the gateway between worlds. Koopa has crowned himself the new 'King' of the Mushroom Kingdom, and rules with an iron fist, waiting for the opportunity to exterminating the human race.

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Tall, well-built for his age. Has slicked back blond hair, dull-gray eyes and is never seen without his trademark black suit. The suit has a shiny-leather suit-jacket, a solid-black fabric shirt, a shiny leather tie, shiny leather pants and black shoes of, you guessed it, shiny black leather. Oh he also has black socks, but they're not leather. Koopa is a dangerous man, trained in several fighting techniques, as well military hand-to-hand combat and swordsmanship. He's skilled in the art of persuasion, and on the outside is a deceivingly charming individual. But inside...inside to Koopa doesn't matter, because at his core, which once had good intentions, now is filled with madness, revenge and spiteful, perfect hatred. Koopa is also as brilliant as he is mad. He designed the 'De-Evolution Technique,' which was first performed on the old King of the Mushroom Kingdom, who now chokes the city as an omnipresent fungus which clings to almost everything in the Kingdom. Koopa's reign of power in the Mushroom Kingdom is along the lines of a dictatorship. And he's not a friendly dictator like in that Charlie Chaplin movie. Koopa is smart, mad and evil and not one to take on individually, maybe not at all.

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I'm torn between two actors to play this incarnation of the notorious 'King' Koopa.
On the one hand, I think John Leguizamo (the original Luigi) could pull it off under the right direction, but on the other hand, I thought of someone who could do it with such precision and effortlessness that he'd be not only the perfect Koopa, but maybe the perfect villain in general. The man I'm talking about of course goes only by the name that so many have come know: Willem Dafoe. That would be awesome.
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Postby 1upmushroom » Wed Jul 22, 2009 2:08 pm

John Luguizamo, That would be a BIG tribute or reference to the '93 film! :D

I also liked the many references to the original "Donkey Kong" games like Pauline and most of all "Stanley" 'cuz I never thought you knew about him. But why'd ya make him a rough cellmate. Also Queen Peach? I never saw THAT coming. :shock: But I like the story its pretty good. But are you STILL writing the one you posted above 'cuz the profiles of the characters sound like their in a different kind of movie. Just wondering.
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Postby Serum » Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:07 pm

1upmushroom wrote:John Luguizamo, That would be a BIG tribute or reference to the '93 film! :D

I also liked the many references to the original "Donkey Kong" games like Pauline and most of all "Stanley" 'cuz I never thought you knew about him. But why'd ya make him a rough cellmate. Also Queen Peach? I never saw THAT coming. :shock: But I like the story its pretty good. But are you STILL writing the one you posted above 'cuz the profiles of the characters sound like their in a different kind of movie. Just wondering.

The big long story way above was a rougher outline for what my draft will become, so in a sense, yes and no.
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Postby 1upmushroom » Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:20 pm

So I guess all seven koopaling's are out are they? Just Iggy and Spike?
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Postby Serum » Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:23 pm

1upmushroom wrote:So I guess all seven koopaling's are out are they? Just Iggy and Spike?

That's up in the air at the moment, I'll have to see what direction this particular draft takes...
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Postby Phlibbit » Thu Jul 23, 2009 11:31 am

I think seven koopalings all at once is way too much, especially for an introductory/reboot film for a new franchise. The koopalings could take up an entire movie by themselves.

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Postby Serum » Thu Jul 23, 2009 1:43 pm

Phlibbit wrote:I think seven koopalings all at once is way too much, especially for an introductory/reboot film for a new franchise. The koopalings could take up an entire movie by themselves.

Yeah, that's sort of what I was thinking, maybe in a sequel or something.
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Postby Serum » Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:05 pm

1upmushroom wrote:So. You working on another profile?

Yeah, I'm currently writing Anthony Scapelli's profile, but I've got a few other hectic things going on at the moment that it's gonna take a few hours to get some more profiles written.
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Postby Serum » Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:49 am

Alright, sorry for the delay, but now I'm back on track writing character profiles, here's our favorite mafia boss, Anthony Scapelli...

SCAPELLI

NAME: Anthony Scapelli
AGE: 55
SEX: Male

HEIGHT: 6'2
WEIGHT: 155lbs
HAIR: Hazel
EYES: Brown

BIO:

Born in Brooklyn in 1938 to the Family Scapelli, Anthony was, from a very young age exposed to a lot of crime and violence. In 1960, his father, Alfredo, was killed in front of his very eyes by a hitman from a rival syndicate, who Anthony quickly took revenge upon, first by killing the hitman, followed by the subsequent order to kill everyone in the rival syndicate, in a massive street war. In the end of this bloody ordeal, the Scapelli Family emerged victorious, now the leading mafia syndicate for all of Manhattan and the local surrounding areas. In 1985 Scapelli befriended local plumber, Mario Mario, who, had lost his parents in a tragic train-wreck a few years prior. Scapelli introduced Mario to his sister, Pauline, and gave them a full-mafia blessing, or, in this case, permission, to date. Scapelli nowadays tries his best to keep the Brooklyn streets safe from rival syndicates, and has since become the head of the Department of Water and Power in the greater New York area.

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Tall, rough-ragged and scarred-face as well as slicked back 80s businessman hair. Always wears a fine Gucci-tailored suit and has a taste for classical music. He speaks with a borderline-smarmy tone of voice, but for the most part, he tries his best to be a good-guy, despite his whole, mafia-based massive organized crime syndicate thing he's got going on. He's a crack-shot with a pistol and is no stranger to hand-to-hand combat. He's seen a lot of blood, but he doesn't let that bother him. Scapelli only gets violent if he absolutely needs to, using a pseudo-Asian philosophy styled around Karate, and the Christian-based 'Golden-Rule,' which he will break if necessary. Scapelli is a practicing Catholic. He is also a very charismatic individual, and has been using his wit and charm for years to bring members of rival syndicates or even law-enforcement to his side of the spectrum. His army grows bigger everyday, all thanks to his good communications skills, and of course the whole fear-inspiring mafia he has behind him. In the February '93 bombing of the World Trade Center, his goons were on scene in order to help firemen and police, a rare occurrence where enemies worked side by side in order to join together and fight a common enemy. Aside from his mafia-based organization, he is the head of the Department of Water and Power, and his business is good for most people. Scapelli may have evil tendencies, but he is not evil, his intentions are good, but like they say, the road to hell is 'paved with good intentions...'

NOTES:

Thinking of the right actor to play Scapelli is difficult, because, if I had been in charge in '93, Al Pacino would have filled the shoes of our favorite kids' movie mafia boss. Unfortunately, Al has gotten too old to properly portray Scapelli, but I think I know another actor who could pull it off. Viggo Mortensen, he was great in David Cronenberg's Eastern Promises, where he played a member of the Russian mafia, who's to say that he can't portray an Italian gentleman? He's about the right age to play the part, too. But, my other choice would be Christian Slater, because he has that certain, smarmy charm that not even Viggo Mortensen has...
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Here's Pauline's profile...

PAULINE

NAME: Pauline Scapelli
AGE: 33
SEX: Female

HEIGHT: 5'6
WEIGHT: 140lbs
HAIR: Auburn
EYES: Blue

BIO:

Born the day after her father was killed in 1960, Pauline is Anthony Scapelli's little sister. She was raised by her brother, Anthony and her mother, Daniella in Brooklyn where she attended a private school for most of her childhood. She met her now-boyfriend Mario in 1985, when Anthony decided Mario was the only person suitable for Pauline to have a meaningful relationship with. Oddly enough, the two really hit it off. She currently works at a local tanning salon, which she also owns and manages. Pauline is something of a jinx, because things tend to go awry wherever she might be. This has made her overly superstitious, she keeps a rabbit's foot with her, as well as penny in her left shoe and an ace of spades in her purse. She does not have a driver's license. Pauline enjoys Chinese food, and is afraid of rats. Her favorite movie is Night of the Comet. In her spare time. Pauline does volunteer work at the local homeless shelter and can often be found with Mario.

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Short, but taller than Mario, built like a porn-star and a little on the husky side. Often seen dressed in a red dress, wearing high-heels and a gold bracelet. She suffers from the same attitude problem that Mario has, short-tempered and ill mannered, Pauline is quick to be snippy with anyone, particularly Daisy, who she has a minor contempt for. Unlike Daisy, though, Pauline is no stranger to self-defense. When she is mistaken for Daisy by the Koopa Cousins, she puts up a fairly good fight, resulting in the breaking of Spike's jaw, but she is ultimately kidnapped. Pauline is also on the crazier side of the proverbial spectrum than Mario when it comes to attitude, as she often resorts to violently comedic solutions to conflict. She's been known to punch store-clerks in the face for no reason other than that she can get away with it because her big brother is in charge of the most powerful mafia syndicate in New York. Numerous attempts have been made to control her temper, including prescription sedatives, which she never takes as well as therapy, which usually results in a lawsuit filed by said therapist for various harassment charges brought on by her incredibly bad attitude. Pauline is not entirely a crazy lady though, as she does have a softer, sweet side that can be seen when she is working at the homeless shelter, or with customers (the ones she likes) at her tanning salon. She's sweet, but full of spunk.

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Judging by the description, my first initial thought in casting the role of Pauline would be an actual porn-star, starring in a totally NON-pornographic role. I don't really know the names of many porn-stars in their early thirties off the top of my head, so I guess that's really out of the question. My other thought, would be to cast Samantha Mathis, the original Daisy from the '93 movie, as Pauline, just have her in fairly heavy make-up to attain a closer resemblance to the description. Samantha Mathis is roughly age appropriate for the role, and could easily pass as an early thirties (if not late twenties) character. Other than that, I'm really at a total loss as who I would cast in the role of Mario's girlfriend...
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Postby Serum » Fri Jul 31, 2009 5:52 am

1upmushroom wrote:So. You making more profiles?

Yeah, I'm going to work on some today, hopefully, I kind of got side-tracked doing a conceptual poster, like I promised myself I wouldn't...
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Postby Serum » Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:14 am

I'm still working on writing stuff, but lately due to a mix of new psychiatric-meds and the stupid Musikfest being about a block from my house it's hard to concentrate on anything other than the humidity and the extremely loud polka music they play from 10AM to 11PM that can be heard literally, miles away. But I assure you, there is more to come, I'm beginning to outline the story soon...stay tuned.
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Postby Serum » Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:42 pm

Oh my gosh, I can't believe I left the most important side character out! Now that Musikfest is winding down, I can start concentrating on this a little more...look for the character profiles of Iggy, Spike and the character I'm about to write...Toad. Stay tuned.
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Postby Serum » Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:25 pm

Alright, here's the character I can't believe I forgot to profile...

TOAD

NAME: “Prime Minister” Toad
AGE: 37
SEX: Male

HEIGHT: 6'0
WEIGHT: 240lbs
HAIR: Gray
EYES: Gray

BIO:

Born sometime in 1956-57, most of Toad's personal history records were destroyed when Koopa had taken over the Mushroom Kingdom in the early 70s. What is known of Toad is that he is the former Prime Minister of the Mushroom Kingdom, but his position of power was overthrown by Koopa, who gave him four options: One was to become a humble yet powerful advisor and rule by Koopa's side, which Toad immediately refused. Two other options were to either be de-evolved into a Goomba or be executed, and the fourth option was permanent exile. Toad chose the latter. He now leads a group of rebels living in the desert outside the Mushroom Kingdom, and is planning a massive assault on Koopa. When he meets up with Mario and Luigi later on, his plans begin to come to fruition, and storms the city with his group of rebels, riding in on the backs of Yoshis, in hopes of reclaiming their city...

DESCRIPTION:

Toad is tall, wild-eyed and somewhat eccentric. Living in the desert for so long has taken its toll on both his pride and his sanity, but it has not taken anything from his constant desire to take back the city. He dresses in robes, similar to the ones Clint Eastwood wore in the movie 'A Fistful of Dollars,' but he wears a faded and torn red and white turban on his head, which, back in the day, signified he was the prime minister of the Mushroom Kingdom. Despite his gruff appearance, tattered clothes and waning sanity, Toad is by no means a pushover. He is incredibly bright-minded and is skilled in the art of 'Fire-Balling,' an ancient technique only a few people know how to use. He's also a born leader, often leading covert teams into the city to scrounge for food and supplies without ever being noticed. Toad is also a natural thief, and a collector of the items he has lifted. His desert hut is full of all sorts of amazing items ranging from bottle-caps to gold-coins. His collection alone is worth a fortune in any dimension. Toad isn't much of a one-on-one fighter, but he is a strategist. For years he's been planning a massive assault on the Mushroom Kingdom's malevolent dictator, Koopa. He plans to light Booster District (The 'Koopa' World Trade Center part of town...) ablaze and burn all the Goombas and Koopa-Troopas and even Koopa himself alive in a massive terroristic attack that will allow him and his followers to restore order amidst chaos. But despite his gruesome plan, Toad's intentions are good, but never cross him, he's a terrorist...but he's a terrorist with a heart of gold.

NOTES:

In casting the role of Toad, I'd probably see someone like Seth Rogen as the wild-eyed, crazed desert dweller. Better yet, if Mojo Nixon would ever consider reprising his role, I'd change some aspects of age/height etcetera and we'd have the same guy playing the same role but from a totally different aspect and with a much larger part on his behalf. Because I know, if you're anything like me, you were pissed that Toad's character was de-evolved and pretty much forgotten in the version we finally got. Even in the '92 draft, Toad had a small, but pivotal part which aided the story in a massive way. Everyone wants to see more of Toad, anyway.
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Postby Serum » Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:57 pm

Here's Iggy's profile, enjoy.

IGGY

NAME: Iggy Koopa
AGE: 29
SEX: Male

HEIGHT: 5'10
WEIGHT: 200lbs
HAIR: White
EYES: Red

BIO:

Very little is known about Iggy Koopa, or his cousin, Spike. They were born in the Dark World, to relatives of Koopa himself, but the exact details of his history are largely unknown and remain so, as he never wants to talk about the past. It often is said that 'Those who are born in the Dark World remain darkened by history.' As is true in the case of Iggy. He currently serves as one of Koopa's two right-hand men, the other being Spike. He is loyal, but clumsy and has screwed over almost every attempt at leading a covert-team of seven (including Iggy and Spike) known as the 'Kooplings,' through the 'regular' dimension in an attempt to find and recover Princess Daisy. He has higher authority over Spike, but not much, and like Spike, and anyone else under Koopa-rule for that matter, he is constantly under the threat of being de-evolved, executed, or both. Iggy is sarcastic in tone and often gives empty threats to anyone in his path that might cross him.

DESCRIPTION:

Iggy, like Spike, is Albino, which, quite contrary to our reality, in his universe, Albinism is seen as one of the highest blessings. He wears his white hair in dreadlocks and is rarely seen without his trademark Aviator sunglasses which hide his hauntingly red eyes from sight. Iggy is trained, but not versed in several forms of combat, he is clumsy and reckless, making him the opposite of Spike, who is acute and ruthlessly accurate. Iggy works his ways more along the psychological spectrum of things, often delivering frightening-- but usually empty threats anyone he doesn't like. Despite all his flaws, there is something Koopa sees in him, and whatever that might be it inspired Koopa to make Iggy the leader of the Specialist Black-Ops team known as 'The Kooplings.' Iggy works well with Spike, as they are both the technical 'head' of the Kooplings, but their often-conflicting views usually end up hurting everyone around them unintentionally and almost always failing the mission they are presented with. Iggy is foul-mouthed, out of shape, but he's a leader, he may not be a good leader, but he's a leader nonetheless. He tends to get drunk off his own power which, as we know, is never good and like said above, often leads to disaster-- hilarious or otherwise.

NOTES:

If I had to cast Iggy right now, I'd put Brendan Frasier in the role. Why? Because Brendan Frasier can balance comedy and seriousness in a way like no one else. If you don't believe me, watch the 1999 movie, The Mummy. He's a wisecracker, but he's very serious about his job, just like the character written in the above profile. If Brendan Frasier was not an option, I'd go with Adam Sandler, and bear with me, because he has the same mentioned talent as Frasier, but he's also much angrier and ruthless, making him more appropriate for the role of Spike. In this version of the script, I want to focus as little attention on Iggy and Spike as possible, because I felt they sort of took over the first half of the 1993 movie, then disappeared for no apparent reason, only to be seen again, briefly, after the end credits, which I doubt many people in theaters stayed to see.
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And finally, here is Spike's profile...now onto other parts of story outlining...

SPIKE

NAME: Spike Koopa
AGE: 33
SEX: Male

HEIGHT: 5'11
WEIGHT: 235lbs
HAIR: White
EYES: Red

BIO:

Spike Koopa, like his cousins, has a history clouded in vaguely defined darkness. However, what is known of Spike is that, like his cousin Iggy, he is Albino, a condition that is regarded as a high blessing as well as treated with utmost respect. Unlike Iggy, however, Spike is not talkative. In fact, Spike cannot speak, as he is mute, due to throat cancer. When he does 'speak' it is through a voice-box which synthesizes speech poorly and unclear. Spike makes up for this through his sheer brute force, he is tall, well-built and as wild as a rabid dog when it comes to fighting, shooting or any form of combat in general. Iggy often speaks for Spike when giving commands to the Kooplings special forces, of which he is second-in command of. His battle-cry is a sound known-well and feared all over the Mushroom Kingdom, a haunting, guttural howl that rocks the foundations of the cores of his enemies very souls. Koopa put him second in charge due to his display of force.

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Spike is tall, broad, muscular and intimidating. His hair is long and unkempt, he wears his voice-box band around his throat like a choke collar. His huge, tattooed muscular arms fit well coming from his sleeveless t-shirt. Unlike Iggy, Spike is not a snappy dresser. When he does 'speak' it's always something useful or commanding, or threatening. Spike also draws up 'game-plans' or strategies, which are often delivered as direct orders by Iggy. His size alone has always made Koopa think of how he's make a great Goomba, but even Koopa is slightly intimidated by Spike, but only to a very tiny degree. Making Spike a Goomba would be a huge mistake on Koopa's part, where almost every Goomba is assigned ranks by their speed, strength and agility, three things that Spike has a lot of, which, in the end would make him an unruly, all-too-powerful waste of a Goomba who Koopa would have to have executed due to his inability to be controlled from a lack of a central nervous system (Spike as a Goomba, that is to say) capable of following basic orders without being blind-sighted by its own sheer strength and power. No, Spike will not become a Goomba, not under Koopa's rule, anyway. Even Koopa knows there are boundaries, and making Spike stronger than he already is just a fruit he must not taste. Spike is quick-tempered, strong and silent, but deadly.

NOTES:

As mentioned in Iggy's profile notes, the role of Spike is probably best suited to someone like Adam Sandler, who can play a comedic/serious part, and in this case, be something of a 'Frankenstein's Monster' part, where he can be a 'bad-guy,' but sympathetic as well as terrifying. Whatever actor I'd cast as Spike would have to pack on muscle and a lot of weight, but given the right effort I think it could be done in the shoes of Adam Sandler. Because whereas Iggy is totally unsympathetic, Spike is sympathetic only in the sense that he something like a Greek-Tragedy, always trying to something right, but someone else (in this case, Iggy) is messing things up, always keeping him in the dust. But as I already stated, Adam Sandler as Spike...or maybe a former professional-wrestler, like Bill Goldberg could work.
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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profiles!

Postby Prime Evil » Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:43 pm

Personally, I think you should have the late, lamented Long John Baldry as Koopa. Seriously, whenever I imagine Bowser/Koopa, I imagine Baldry's voice coming out of the creature's mouth (can you say "I HATE THAT PLUMBEEEEERRRRRRR!!!!!"?)

And throw in Rick Moranis or even Eddie Deezen as Professor E. Gadd, who ventured into the Mushroom Kingdom and found himself imprisoned in the Ghost House. :twisted:

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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profi

Postby Serum » Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:12 am

Prime Evil wrote:Personally, I think you should have the late, lamented Long John Baldry as Koopa. Seriously, whenever I imagine Bowser/Koopa, I imagine Baldry's voice coming out of the creature's mouth (can you say "I HATE THAT PLUMBEEEEERRRRRRR!!!!!"?)

And throw in Rick Moranis or even Eddie Deezen as Professor E. Gadd, who ventured into the Mushroom Kingdom and found himself imprisoned in the Ghost House. :twisted:

I don't think I know John Baldry, at least not directly...I'd probably know him if you pointed him out to me.
Also, since my version of the story takes place in the early 90s, I'm trying to use pre-2000 games as a reference, only--
...but you're idea is highly creative, I like that. :mrgreen:
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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profi

Postby Prime Evil » Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:00 am

MerrittTheFerret wrote:I don't think I know John Baldry, at least not directly...I'd probably know him if you pointed him out to me.
Also, since my version of the story takes place in the early 90s, I'm trying to use pre-2000 games as a reference, only--
...but you're idea is highly creative, I like that. :mrgreen:

1. He was a blues singer in the '60s and '70s, and voiced Dr. Robotnik on The Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog (not SatAM). Strangely, his Robotnik voice is exactly what I'd imagine Bowser to sound like. Sadly, he died in 2005 or so...

2. Eh, it was more of a "throw it out there" thing.

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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profi

Postby Serum » Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:03 pm

Prime Evil wrote:He voiced Dr. Robotnik on The Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog (not SatAM). Strangely, his Robotnik voice is exactly what I'd imagine Bowser to sound like. Sadly, he died in 2005 or so...

Was he the one on the Sonic show that was more Sci-Fi based, he had the most evil-sounding voice! It was great, I'd definitely cast him as the voice of the 'Regressed Koopa,' at the end when Koopa becomes 'Bowser.' Too bad he died...
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Postby 1upmushroom » Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:17 pm

No. That was Jim Cunnings. Is THIS what you were talking about? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=whjVucqw-wo
Isn't this a little feminine?

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Postby Serum » Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:19 pm

1upmushroom wrote:No. That was Jim Cunnings. Is THIS what you were talking about? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=whjVucqw-wo

Yeah I'm thinking of that one.
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Postby Prime Evil » Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:22 pm

MerritTheFerret wrote:find her as a direct match with a small 'scouter' like device

Why, oh, why can I practically smell the "OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAND!!!!" gag from ten miles away? :twisted:

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Postby Serum » Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:06 pm

Prime Evil wrote:
MerritTheFerret wrote:find her as a direct match with a small 'scouter' like device

Why, oh, why can I practically smell the "OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAND!!!!" gag from ten miles away? :twisted:

Ha, I was waiting for that.
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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profiles!

Postby Serum » Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:04 am

Hey, everybody!

I'm starting to work on the Story Outline, which will become the basis for the screenplay.
I thought I'd give you a little taste, with the outline I've written of the opening scene...


The film opens with a quote:
“Sometimes being a brother is better than being a superhero.”
~ Marc Brown

Then, we see a man sitting in a beautiful, black-leather/alligator skin desk chair, facing away from the screen. He is seated in front of about nine television screens, in three rows of threes, built into the wall, displaying various security surveillance scenes taken from cameras. We now see his face, a distraught-looking man, in his mid-fifties, staring at the screens, his chin resting in his hand, deep in contemplative thought. Then, on the middle screen, something happens, a parking garage explodes into smoke! The man's eyes grow wide as he watches in terror as the screens all go from crystal image to complete static. He walks to the window of the office and looks out. Now we're looking from the outside in, at him looking out. Slowly, the camera begins to pull out to reveal he's looking out of a window from a nightmarish version of one of the original World Trade Center's Twin Towers. Slowly but surely now, we're pulling away even further, revealing smoke billowing from the base of the South Tower, the sound of sirens can be heard all around. As the camera pulls out more, it is revealed that all the water around this would-be Manhattan is gone, replaced with a desert landfill. 'Gimme Shelter,' by The Rolling Stones begins to play, as an Apache Helicopter shoots into view, from the upper right hand corner, racing to the scene of the incident at the World Trade Center. Continuing on outward, and outward, we see the true desolate nature of this world, garbage and old cars litter the desert of what might have once been a harbor for ships. Finally as the song comes to a climax, we see a horrifying sight: The Statue of Liberty, only it's not the Statue of Liberty, but a grotesque rendering of Lady Liberty, buried up to her neck in sand and debris, covered in graffiti vandalized beyond repair. The screen goes black, the opening credits begin to roll to some music...



...and some more...


After the credits sequence ends, we cut to black, and hear the sound of a wrench tightening something, following by a 'clang' noise, followed by someone gruffly saying 'aw, shit.' Cut into a scene of run-down apartment building where we see a man squeezed under a kitchen sink, trying to fix something, an elderly woman sitting at the kitchen table, playing bridge with two of her friends. “Are you alright, dear?” She asks the man under the sink, who sits up abruptly, slamming his head into something, then we see his face: It's Mario. He looks at the elderly ladies at the table and just chuckles. “Nothing I can't handle, ladies.” He says confidently. The camera pans over to Luigi, Mario's younger brother, who is looking out the window, at the Twin Towers against the strong Manhattan Skyline across the river. The words “Brooklyn, New York-- August, 1993” appear at the bottom of the screen as Luigi walks over to Mario, who is muttering something foul under his breath. “Mario, you need help with that?” Luigi asks. “Yeah, actually uh, if you could get a, uh...” Mario looks at the leaking pipe. “Yeah, definitely a quarter-spud, and get some tubing from the truck, A-Sap.” Luigi grabs a toolbox off the counter and opens it, pulls out the appropriate tool and hands it to Mario, “Alright I'll go get the tubing.” Mario sits up for a second, pulls an old handkerchief from a pocket and stuffs in in the broken pipe, he nods at Luigi, gratefully. Mario stands up for a second, briefly takes off his backwards, faded red baseball cap and wipes sweat from his head and readjusts the rubber band around his ponytail then puts the hat back on the way it was. “Ma'am, do you mind if I got a glass of water from your bathroom?” The woman looks up from her game and smiles, “Not at all, Mister Mario, help yourself.” Mario chuckles, “Thank you, Ma'am, also you can drop the formability there, 'Mario' is my last name, you can just call me 'Mario,' alright?” The woman looks slightly confused. “I thought your last name was 'Mario?'” Mario grabs a paper cup from the counter, “It's also my first name, we're not called the 'Mario Bros,' because I like to take all the credit, ya know.” He chuckles and walks to the other room and pours himself a glass of water. The three old ladies look at each other and chuckle like schoolgirls. Mario is gulping down the water in the bathroom, looking out the window, down at Luigi, who is getting some equipment out of their old milk-van turned plumbing truck. A trio of guys walk up to Luigi, wearing white jumpsuits, Mario freaks and runs out of the apartment. Down on the street, Luigi, who is wrapping up some rubber tubing turns around to see the three men walking towards him. He doesn't look intimidated, but the men seem menacing. “Hey Luigi,” the middle guy, Doug, starts. Farley and Vinnie, the other two guys just sort of stand in the shadows, menacingly. Luigi puts the tubing down, calmly. “Doug, Vinnie, Farley, what's up.” He says, non-nonchalantly. Cut to Mario, running down the hall from the old lady's apartment, she yells “Is everything alright, Mario?” Mario, running carelessly for the elevator yells back “Yeah, I'll be back up in a minute, my brother might be in trouble!” He pushes the button for the elevator, but nothing, it doesn't light up or ding at all. “Shit...” He mutters as the old lady yells down the hall “The elevator's broke again? I'm going to have to call the landlord...” Mario rolls his eyes and runs to a door that says “STAIRS.” Meanwhile, back down on the street, Luigi is facing the three guys, alone. They each have the words “PASCAL: Water & Power Services” stitched to the backs of their white coveralls. “Where's your big bro, Luigi?” Doug asks, his voice growing increasingly malevolent. Cut back to Mario, tearing ass down the stairs as fast as he can. Back on the street we see Luigi, his fists tightening, ready to fight, as he says “Inside, fixing something.” Doug chuckles cruelly. “What's he fixing, you're welfare check?” Luigi has fear and loathing in his eyes, now. But Mario bursts out the front doors of the tenement building as Doug is about to pounce on Luigi, Mario screams “Hey, Pascals! You touch him and you're dead!” Seemingly all at once, everyone turns their heads towards Mario, who's clenching his fists in anger, panting from having run down all the steps. But Doug only grins and walks towards Mario, Farley and Vinnie following slowly behind. “Mario Mario, son of Vito Mario...Master Plumber. A shame he's dead.” Mario punches a large, tin ventilation duct next to Doug's face, causing it to dent heavily with a huge clang. Now the tables have turned, Doug seems intimidated, for once. “You touch me, you die. You touch Luigi you die. If you're not outta here in thirty seconds, you die.” Doug smiles wickedly. “Are you aware, Mario, my father's company could by and sell yours five-hundred times over?” But Mario, who's seeing red starts: “Twenty-nine seconds, twenty-eight seconds, twenty-seven seconds...” Doug waves his men back to their truck, angrily glaring at Mario. “We'll be back, we'll be back you bastard.” Mario continues counting “Twenty-six seconds, twenty-five seconds...” They start back to their truck, Doug grabs his tool-bag and looks at Luigi for a second, then yells 'BOO!' in his face, Luigi twitches a little. Doug gets in the driver's seat of the truck and starts to drive off, Vinnie flips The Brothers off, Mario screams, angrily at the truck as it drives off yelling “Don't come back!” Luigi sits down on the back of their truck, Mario walks over to him. “Hey, you alright, bro?” Luigi nods, absently. “Why won't they just let us alone, Mario?” Mario sits down next to Luigi, putting his hand on Luigi's shoulder. “Don't worry about Doug and his insane little posse, those guys are assholes, nothing else.” Luigi nods. Mario stands up and smiles, “Come on, we gotta job to finish, what do ya say, let's finish it.” They walk back into the building, then we pan over to a shady figure in an alley...



...much, much more to come.
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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profiles!

Postby Prime Evil » Thu Aug 13, 2009 10:35 am

I'm loving this more and more every day.

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Re: Official FAN-SCREENPLAY thread! Now with Character Profi

Postby Serum » Thu Aug 13, 2009 10:42 am

Prime Evil wrote:I'm loving this more and more every day.

I'm glad to hear that! :mrgreen: I'm working on more soon, I have a few errands to run today, but I should be able to get more done, soon.
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