Enter the Mushroom Kingdom Revival!

[awesomeman500]

YAY!
Anyway, I got locked out of my other account because I couldn't remember the password, nor the password to the email account it was associated with. So I hope you don't mind that I just made a new account.

FINALLY, I have a draft script finished for my ancient "Enter the Mushroom Kingdom" project which you can read here:
http://pc.celtx.com/project/ZiOzExCdfSn ... EqvojZWTHA

Anyway, now that I have that done I am in need of some feedback for additions (or subtractions) in the script.

[Phlibbit]

I haven't got a chance to read this yet; I'll try to do so this weekend

[awesomeman500]

Another relatively small update.
I made a poster:
http://awesomeman500.deviantart.com/art ... -117204196

[Carl]

i have to say, that is a pretty dang dark view of the Mario mythos. I mean, yikes.
But, it's also a very creative and new approach. Instead of being the hero by heart who valiently dashes in to save the day, Mario has an even heavier "everyman" feel. He's got problems, issues and weaknesses like any human.

[awesomeman500]

i have to say, that is a pretty dang dark view of the Mario mythos. I mean, yikes.
But, it's also a very creative and new approach. Instead of being the hero by heart who valiently dashes in to save the day, Mario has an even heavier "everyman" feel. He's got problems, issues and weaknesses like any human.

Thanks for the feedback.
LOL. I know it's a bit disturbing. I just wrote the characters like normal people. And of course there's a load of swearing in there (which I think might be able to be toned down).

But seriously, thanks for the feedback.
You seem to be the only person to have read the script. All others who I've given it to read over haven't read it or have forgotten.

[SuperWario34]

the script is good, now, Awesomeman, its been awhile. I still want to be your key artist, also I don't know if your giving out any departments yet, buy I edit using Final Cut Studio and am pretty expierenced. Also I can be you color grade artist. I still don't do 3d work, but I do almost everything else. Email me.