Fan made scripts?

[SuperWario34]

For some reason I really want to read a script for a sequal for this film.

Does anyone have any fan scripts I can read? I'll give my critique if you want.

[ultimateemail5000]

For some reason I really want to read a script for a sequal for this film.

Does anyone have any fan scripts I can read? I'll give my critique if you want.

It's not much, but it's a trailer I wrote for a sequel, I'll take critique. It's kind of a parody/sequel of it. You know how all movie sequels are though, the same thing as the first and, hopefully you picture it in your head. Maybe this summer a trailer, and a trailer only could be filmed. I have friends who are down with it, plus the Mario jumpsuit is officially made. But at any rate, enjoy the trailer script.

SMB2 Trailer
Written by
Chad Kyer

Cut too: Brooklyn New York, in the background a news reporter can be heard

Cut too: News broadcast on TV

Newsreporter
I'd call them, The Super Mario Bros.

Cut too: Blank Screen

Cut too: The movie company logo

Daisy (VO)
Luigi, Mario!

Cut too: Daisy bursting into the Mario's apartment

Daisy
You're never gonna believe this.

Cut too: Koopa forming back to himself from slime

Cut too: Koopa and his elite of Goombas

Koopa is giving a speech to Brooklyn, on stage

King Koopa
I, King Koopa, have found way to the real world...WITHOUT THE ROCK!! I call it, a Warp Zone!

Cut too: Daisy talking to the Bros.

Mario
So you mean -

Daisy
He's back!

Cut too: the Mario Bros. wall being blown out

King Koopa
Princess Daisy, join me in conquoring...THE REAL WORLD! AH HAHAHAHAHA!

Narrator(VO)
THIS SUMMER

Cut too: Koopa giving the same speech to Brooklyn

King Koopa
If I'm not elected as President, I will turn you all into Goombas! You!

Cut too: Koopa's P.O.V. of his finger pointing at citizens of Brookyln

KoopaVO
You will be a goomba, you, you, you, goombas. You sir, you have a family?

Cut too: Koopa on stage

Koopa
Not anymore, you'll be a Goomba.

Narrator
STRAP YOUR' TOOL BELTS ON

Mario
Luigi let's go, and don't forget your' belt!

Luigi
After over 20 years Mario I'm kinda used to having it around.

Narrator
AND GET YOUR DEVO GUNS READY

Cut too: Koopa shooting his Devo gun

King Koopa
AH HAHAHAHA!

Cut too: Innocent people turning into goombas and slime

Narrator
FOR THE ULTIMATE ACTION THRILL RIDE

Cut too: A police chase involving the Bros.

Mario
With Koopa using those devo guns, everyone in the city's against us!

Luigi
Shh, Mario, I'm trying to drive here.

Mario
Well then pay attention to the road!

Cut too: the bros. driving through an explosion

Narrator
OF A LIFE TIME!

Cut too: the Bros. shooting at Koopa with Devo guns until he explodes

Title: SMB II

Narrator
SUPER MARIO BROS II.

Cut too: Credits

Cut too: A remake of the ending to the original SMB

Mario
I believe it.

Luigi
You do?!

Mario
Haha, yeah, I believe.

[SuperWario34]

Wow, pretty good, I don't know about the plot, but it's written good.

[Sonicroc]

I love that line: "You will be a goomba, you, you, you, goombas. You sir, you have a family?"

But really, I wouldn't like it if Koopa came back, especially if his plan was exactly the same as in the first movie.

PS: You spelled "to" wrong in "cut too."